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| Tema: An Unlikely Candidate Tor Mai 16, 2013 6:18 pm | |
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Hansen.
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| Tema: Re: An Unlikely Candidate Søn Mai 19, 2013 2:01 am | |
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Husbyfan
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| Tema: Re: An Unlikely Candidate Søn Mai 19, 2013 4:27 pm | |
| Oh Snap! tweaks: - Spoiler:
- Sitat :
- We need to keep an eye on that one. Scarcely in his teens that one, and still willing to sell out his friend for a few gold"
- Sitat :
- We need to keep an eye on that one. Scarcely in his teens and still willing to sell out his friend for a few gold"
Unnecessary repetition, the reader still remembers who we are talking about since no other object have been mentioned. tought = taught Dissapearing = disappearing - Sitat :
- She woke feeling more rested
- Sitat :
- She awoke feeling more rested
woke = awoke "woke up" would have been more correct use of "woke". Woke: to become roused from sleep; awake; awaken; waken (often followed by up ).
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Hansen.
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| Tema: Re: An Unlikely Candidate Søn Mai 19, 2013 5:30 pm | |
| Takker så meget Om du ikkje fant flere skrivefeil enn d der så må e si me fornøyd, hehe.' edit : Da va det fiksa. Takker igjen | |
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Hansen.
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| Tema: Re: An Unlikely Candidate Fre Mai 24, 2013 5:02 pm | |
| Oppdatert. Sjå førstepost. | |
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Hansen.
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| Tema: Re: An Unlikely Candidate Søn Mai 26, 2013 2:24 am | |
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Husbyfan
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| Tema: Re: An Unlikely Candidate Søn Mai 26, 2013 8:19 pm | |
| Del heller et google-doc, direktelink så en slipper å laste ned og styr.
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Hansen.
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| Tema: Re: An Unlikely Candidate Man Mai 27, 2013 12:42 am | |
| Da va den google doc'ified gitt | |
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